Today I and my class went on a whitebait trip it was so much fun.
The group I was in caught a lot of little fish, I had so much fun with everyone.
we got wet in the water, running around, rocks everywhere, kids looking at all the fish and walking into cow poo and jumping over it.
My group was Troy, Kate, Tamzyn, Nivayah, Caley.
By Carla-Rose
Hi Carla-Rose, Its Chloe from belfast school. That sounds fun. Was it hard to catch it or was it easy. Maybe next time you could add some photos for people too see. but other than that it sounded fun!
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I really like your writing about your Whitebait trip with your class! Do you like Whitebait? I don´t like Whitebait that much.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could make your writing more descriptive, you could add more punctuation, and lastly you could check your writing before you post it.
Over all I really enjoyed reading your story and keep up the good work!!
Luna from Belfast School.
Kia Ora Carla-Rose My name is Olivia from Belfast School,
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing of your White-Bait trip.
Did you think about adding some pictures.
Maybe next time you could check your capital letters, other than that it is great.
Do you like White Bait?
Hello Carla-rose! My name is Laura and I am from Belfast school.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like so much fun!
did you get to cook and eat any of the white bait?
Maybe next time you could add a more detailed disruption of what you did?
Have a good day!