Hi, Carla, I'm Rawiri from Awahono school. I like the picture of the ship that you put in. Going on a cruise ship sounds like a lot of fun. Maybe next time you could put a period after the word "family" because the sentence doesn't make sense. Kind regards, from Rawiri.
Hi Carla-Rose. I am Zoe from Awahono School.I like the photo of the ship that you have put. I like how you have put the words in a big font. Maybe next time you could make the picture bigger.
Hi I am Mackley From Awahono School. It must of been pretty call to ride on a boat. Maybe next time you can say how many days you were on the boat. Kind regards Mackley
Hi Carla, Annabelle here from Awahono School. I liked the cruise ship you went on and it sounded like alot of fun. Next time you could tell me more information about your trip.
Hi Carla, Amelia here from Awahono School. That is awesome that you got to go on a cruise. I have never been on a cruise before. I like how you said who you went with. Maybe next time you could give us a bit more information about your holiday. Good Job from Amelia.
Kia Ora, My name is Hayley and I go to Matawai School. I have never been on a cruise before, but I think that it would be very cool. Next time you add a little more about what you did on the cruise. You could also add the name of which 5 islands you went too!
Hi, Carla, I'm Rawiri from Awahono school. I like the picture of the ship that you put in. Going on a cruise ship sounds like a lot of fun. Maybe next time you could put a period after the word "family" because the sentence doesn't make sense.
ReplyDeleteKind regards, from Rawiri.
Hi Carla-Rose. I am Zoe from Awahono School.I like the photo of the ship that you have put. I like how you have put the words in a big font. Maybe next time you could make the picture bigger.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Mackley From Awahono School. It must of been pretty call to ride on a boat. Maybe next time you can say how many days you were on the boat. Kind regards Mackley
ReplyDeleteHi Carla, Annabelle here from Awahono School. I liked the cruise ship you went on and it sounded like alot of fun. Next time you could tell me more information about your trip.
ReplyDeleteHi Carla, Amelia here from Awahono School. That is awesome that you got to go on a cruise. I have never been on a cruise before. I like how you said who you went with. Maybe next time you could give us a bit more information about your holiday. Good Job from Amelia.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hayley and I go to Matawai School.
I have never been on a cruise before, but I think that it would be very cool. Next time you add a little more about what you did on the cruise.
You could also add the name of which 5 islands you went too!
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