Hi Carla-Rose, I'm Cate from Belfast school. I think your comment was really thoughtful. I liked the way you put lots of effort into it! I loved how you screen-shot the comment. It reminded me of the many(!)comments I've done before! Maybe next time add more of a description to what you were doing, how long it took, explain a bit more about your WALT(We Are Learning To). Other than that I think your your comment was really cool! Ka Pai! Cate
Hi Carla-Rose, It is Zara here from Belfast School. I liked how your comment had a positive first,then thoughtful, then helpful. Wen I read your comment it made me think of when we had to learn how to do a good comment. Next time you could set a challenge for yourself and add more detail,for example tell her what part of the clay art you actually liked. What do you think you could work on next time?
Hi Carla-Rose, I'm Cate from Belfast school.
ReplyDeleteI think your comment was really thoughtful. I liked the way you put lots of effort into it! I loved how you screen-shot the comment. It reminded me of the many(!)comments I've done before! Maybe next time add more of a description to what you were doing, how long it took, explain a bit more about your WALT(We Are Learning To). Other than that I think your your comment was really cool! Ka Pai!
Cate
Hi Carla-Rose,
ReplyDeleteIt is Zara here from Belfast School.
I liked how your comment had a positive first,then thoughtful, then helpful.
Wen I read your comment it made me think of when we had to learn how to do a good comment.
Next time you could set a challenge for yourself and add more detail,for example tell her what part of the clay art you actually liked.
What do you think you could work on next time?